Received Song Assessment feedback for Isabella and Detours

I received feedback for Isabella and Detours from the Song Assessment Service this week. (I had submitted these in December; see Song Assessments - Isabella and Detours). The assessor noted that I hadn't included the lyric sheets - I don't know how that happened because I was certain I had sent them along with my application.

He commented that the vocals were too low in the mix. Without the lyric sheet he couldn't follow or comment on the lyrics. He also commented on the lack of structure - no bridge or chorus, and that Isabella was too short - about a minute long.

He made mention of the "poor" packaging - I hadn't created a label for the CD I submitted, just handwrote the track names on the CD with a felt tipped marker.

He made a note that I can resubmit my tracks if I enclose the lyric sheets. I don't know if that means I'll have to pay another assessment fee. I'll have to look into it and decide if I will resubmit.

To date, I have brought two versions of Friday Nights at The Wedge to Date With a Tape, and sent Isabella and Detours to the Song Assessment Service. I'll have to digest the feedback I've received from all of these reviews and decide what my next step will be.