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From Tewkesbury, United Kingdom -
lovely intro. reminds me of the solo work of KNOPFLER.
The vocals began.............
very nasal.
Oooooooooooooh noooooooooo
No way can Dissipate into white foam be seriously matched with a 4/4 beat..you sing the phrasing like they are all triplets...or .syncopated
The strings are nice ....for a keyboard....and the arpeggiating doubling up of the appropriate moment of the solo is a good idea.
tehe classical references in the pregression are nice...
This has to be religious as it is so blatently OTT in it's lyrical..cheese
best bit ... ending resolution chord.....settles like dust after a storm
From Ashbourne, United Kingdom -
It's a nice, open production.
Simple arrangement, with some lovely, subtle strings.
The vocals are odd - they made me think of Sesame Street, for some reason - it's not a classic singing voice, not very good intonation, but it does have personality.
The song lacks a focused melody, feeling it meanders around, and even now, 30 seconds after listening, I couldn't hum the tune.
The lyrics are quite poetic, not conforming to easily defined rhyming structures.
The production/recording is very good, well mixed, nice, warm tone.
My favourite part is the string arrangement - very impressive.
Good luck.
From Oswego, Illinois -
very clear folk style here. I thought the lead vocals could use some production, kind of a harsh sound and really brought out in mix. The lyrics were poetic but didn't really hold interest for me. I guess it sounds cliche and would help to have a more personal, emotional theme. The arrangement and strings add interest and done well. I think it sould use some back up vocals also.
From Canada -
This song makes me think I'm going to be hearing a christmas carol or something similar. I don't mean that as a put-down. It's a feel-good thing.
The strings are ridiculously beautiful.
The vocal is very unusual. Sung well, and a very meek tone. And again - not a put down.
This should be in 'alternative acoustic' if such a genre existed.
From Klein, Texas -
the vocal is way to overpowering also the overall vocal track is like how they say one tone making it somewhat boring and hard to follow good voice and backing tracks but it almost seems to flow me to sleep add alittle edge and I think you will have it
From Somerset, California -
Enya, Anuna, and Loreena McKennitt style - celtic. Wonderful guitar playing. The orchestra added a tremendous amount. I'm curious - did you have this recorded at a professional studio, or do you have a software program that allows you to add provided music tracks? Either way, it sounds great.
From San Juan, Puerto Rico -
this track has a very well done mastering. The guitars are great.The lyrics are a bit depressing. But a lot of props for the tune!
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